| Dear Doris,
I have placed asterisks immediately
after the errors in your writing. In this paragraph you had problems with
1)verb tense, 2)use of articles, and 3)a run on sentence.
My most unforgettable experience
happened six months after I arrive ** in Taipei from Kaohsiung. I was buying
a car as soon as I could because the apartment I living ** in was many
miles from my college. I had not drive ** for many years, ** this is **
my first time driving in Taipei. During this past year, I drove ** to college
at 8:00, then to a part time job at 3:00, and then home at 10:00 every
day. About 3:00 one afternoon I drove on the main road when it suddenly
began to rain, and the roads became very slippery. I never saw the driver
of the other car lose control until the car was directly in front of me....Now,
I always wear my seatbelt and make everyone in the car to buckle up **
before I start my car. This is ** my frightening experience.
Please correct the errors
and send me the corrected copy of your work.
As for my meals-- I typically
have fruit and cereal or toast for breakfast. For lunch and dinner I eat
a wide variety of foods. For lunch I might have soup and a sandwich. Dinner
usually includes a salad, a serving of meat, and one or two side vegetables.
I eat a lot of foods from
other countries. Almost every town in the U.S. has at least one Chinese
restaurant and Chinese food is very popular here. I like almost all of
the Chinese dishes.
I look forward to hearing
from you, Doris.
Yours,
Lauren |
