Subject good to read the others'
Posted by Kate
Posted on Wed Dec 9 22:28:44 1998
From IP  
In Reply to Journal of Poetry Unit<Ēš>

Hi, Sheryl,

It's good that you read and learned from the others' journals. You also made some good points about the chances to get off the train. Indeed those two chances you mentioned are not great ones. But then other people (i.e. the husband) should be on the train, right?

I know so many women who take care of their children alone.
As for your analysis, try to write more about specific metaphors.


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