Subject images of dying
Posted by Kate
Posted on Thu Dec 10 04:49:57 1998
From IP  
In Reply to Poetry3

Hi, Carol,

Yes, I also like this line -- "The smile on your mouth was the deadest thing alive enough to have strength to die¡K"

It is not only well phrased; it is vivid, too. I can almost visualize a film with this departing scene. It is very sad, but is it a bit too sentimental? This is a question I have been thinking about.

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