paragraph development
http://web.uvic.ca/wguide//Pages/ParOrderIntro.html (from The UVic Writer's Guide) http://www.uottawa.ca/academic/arts/writcent/hypergrammar/parunif.html (from HyperGrammar) http://www.uottawa.ca/academic/arts/writcent/hypergrammar/rvpardev.html(from HyperGrammar)
http://web.uvic.ca/wguide//Pages/ParUnity.html (from The UVic Writer's Guide)
topic sentence
http://web.uvic.ca/wguide//Pages/ParTopicSent.html (from The UVic Writer's Guide) http://www.bartleby.com/141/strunk.html#10(from Elements of Style)
thesis statement
http://writing2.richmond.edu/writing/wweb/thesis.html(from Writer's Web)
wrong transition
http://web.uvic.ca/wguide//Pages/MarkTrans.html (from The UVic Writer's Guide) http://www.english.uiuc.edu/cws/wworkshop/writttech.transiti.htm
confused thinking; logic
http://web.uvic.ca/wguide//Pages/LogicTOC.html (from The UVic Writer's Guide)
coherence
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/general/gl_cohere.html http://web.uvic.ca/wguide//Pages/ParagraphTransitions.html (from The UVic Writer's Guide)