Nonparallel (Awkward Sentence)
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Parallel (Revised Sentence)
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Seeing is to believe.
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Seeing is believing.
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I saw him falling in love, to become
lovelorn, and he married a woman he hardly knew.
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I saw him falling in love, becominglovelorn,
and finally marrying a woman he hardly knew.
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I bought food for the hamster, dog, and the
cat.
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I bought food for the hamster,
the dog and the cat.
OR
I bought food for the hamster, dog,
and cat.
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My teacher graded my composition as underdeveloped,
poorly organized, and not having coherence.
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My teacher graded my composition as underdeveloped,
poorly organized, and incoherent.
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Your excuse is not only unreasonable but (also)
I find it hard to believe.
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Your excuse is not only unreasonable but
unbelievable.
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I believe that love is definitely more important
than having money.
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I believe that love is definitely more important
than money.
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My friend was nicely served; I did not have
good service.
OR
My friend was nicely served, while the waiter
gave me poor service.
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My friend was nicely served; I was not.
OR
My friendly was nicely served, while I was
not.
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Students can be generally divided into three
types: those who never study; those who only cram before exams; and
diligent students.
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Students can be generally divided into three
types: those who never study; those who only cram before exams; andthose
who study day andnight.
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My experience as a freshman is both exciting
and I will never forget.
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My experience as a freshman is both exciting
and unforgettable.
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