1. Have you give yourself another chance perusuing a life different from
reality of what you are? (S) (Answer)
2. His success of producing the famous reputation are ascribed to his
unusual, various and unpredicted demeanor in the film. the subject
of this sentence is "his success", so the verb should be "is". (VY)(Answer)
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Avoid Wordiness, Redundancy, Repetitions:
1. The attraction to the bridge gives me both combined physical and spiritual
satisfactory. (V) (Answer)
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Syntax: Conjunctions and Relative
Pronouns:
1. One morning at a place CALLED THE BUSY BEE, I was having coffee with
a Chicago social reformer. (Answer)
2. ...those WHOSE LACK OF EDUCATION WOULD ONCE HAVE RESTRICTED THEM
TO FACTORY WORK must now resort to jobs in less lucrative ... (VY)
(Answer)
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Syntax: Run-on and Fused Sentence
1. I just opened my eyes and had a big stretch, lying on the bed seeing
through the window. (B) (Answer)
2. It's something changed every seconds in color, in shapes, even in
my mind, which is also the reason why it
fascinates me so much.(V)(Answer)
3. It seemed that every student had gone to school sitting in the class,
except me. (B)(Answer)
4.But if the teacher wouldn't turn to the board and keep on watching
the student lecturing, what could I do? Should I pretend nothing walking
into the classroom and sit down or entered during the break? (B)
(Answer)
6. I began to walked with my head down and afraid that some teacher
might happen to pass here and came across with me. (B)
7. So what I see on the bridge is the sky, mountain and river seems
to just wake up not long after the dawn.(V)(Answer)
8. No matter how exhausted I am, or I'm already in deep sleep, I would
know and suddenly wake up as long as the bus steps on the side of bridge.(V)(Answer)
9. Then zooming further back, I see the very few old cottages situated
behind the river embankment, which seems really bizarre and out of the
surrounded highways and skyscrapers.(V)(Answer)
1. I did not quite realize what was the burden bore so hard on her think
shoulder, not until was my younger brother born, everything became clear
then. (S) (Answer)
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Chinese English (Non-Idiomatic
expressions)
1. Of a sudden, my mother started to wear an undertone smile on her face.(S)
(Answer)
2. I tried to think out the condition in class and guess if the teacher
would gave a roll this week or not. (B) (Answer)
3. I tried to think out the condition in class and guess if the teacher
would take a roll this week or not. (Answer)
4. The dilemma now is that could we temporarily change our identity
and remain the present life.(S) (Answer)
5. This makes their communication can smoothly going on without caring
about the social rules and customs.(S) (Answer)
6. A large number of people, including me, are inclined to watch his
movies repeadedly to "review" the plots of his each remarkably interesting
movies whenever we turn on the channel unconsciously or unintentionally.
(Answer)
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Introduction & Transition: